Business Analyst – Riyadh The successful candidate (Corporate jargon — say what you mean in plain words) will be responsible for leveraging (Corporate jargon — say what you mean in plain words) cross-functional synergies (Corporate jargon — say what you mean in plain words) in order to facilitate the optimisation of end-to-end business processes, and the incumbent (Third person — write 'you' instead) shall demonstrate a proactive approach (Corporate jargon — say what you mean in plain words) to stakeholder engagement within a fast-paced environment (Corporate jargon — say what you mean in plain words) characterised by evolving strategic priorities. The candidate (Third person — write 'you' instead) will gather and document requirements from key stakeholders (Corporate jargon — say what you mean in plain words), translate them into functional specifications and deliverables (Corporate jargon — say what you mean in plain words), and work closely with the development team, the quality assurance team and the project management office to ensure that solutions are delivered on time, within budget and in accordance with best-in-class (Corporate jargon — say what you mean in plain words) governance frameworks. The ideal candidate (Third person — write 'you' instead) is a self-starter (Corporate jargon — say what you mean in plain words) with 5 years of experience as a business analyst, a bachelor's degree in information systems or a related field, and excellent communication skills in English and Arabic. Interested candidates should send their CV to [email protected]
10/100 · Hard to read
Missing: Reading ease 0/25
Flesch reading ease 4: very hard, like a legal contract. Rewrite in short, everyday sentences.
Missing: Short sentences 0/20
Average 27 words per sentence. Aim for under 20 — split sentences at "and", "which" and semicolons.
Improve: Easy to scan on a phone 5/15
0 bullet points and 0 paragraphs over 70 words. Most Gulf job seekers apply on a phone — use headings and bullets for duties, requirements and benefits.
Missing: No corporate jargon 0/15
Buzzwords: "the successful candidate", "leveraging", "synergies", "incumbent", "proactive approach", "fast-paced environment". Replace each with the concrete thing you mean.
Missing: Talks to 'you' 0/15
Mostly third person ("the candidate / incumbent" 4×, "you" 0×). Rewrite to "you" — it's shorter and feels personal.
Improve: Reading time 5/10
135 words — too thin to judge the role. Add duties, requirements, salary and benefits.
- Words:
- 135
- Reading ease:
- 4
- Avg sentence:
- 27 words
- Reading time:
- 1 min