Sales Executive – Dubai We are a fast-growing FMCG distributor looking for a young (Age-coded word — describe the work instead), aggressive (Masculine-coded word — fine on its own, but a cluster of them puts some applicants off) and competitive (Masculine-coded word — fine on its own, but a cluster of them puts some applicants off) salesman (Gendered job word — try 'salesperson', 'supervisor', 'workforce') who is fearless (Masculine-coded word — fine on its own, but a cluster of them puts some applicants off) with targets. Male candidates only (Gender restriction — hire on skills, not gender), single status (Marital-status restriction — drop it; marital status says nothing about ability) preferred. Responsibilities: - Visit retail outlets across Dubai and Sharjah - Hit monthly sales targets - Report daily to the sales manager Requirements: - 2+ years of FMCG sales in the UAE - Valid UAE driving licence - Native English speaker (Say 'fluent' instead of 'native' (nationality-coded)) You will be a rockstar (Hype phrase — say what the job involves instead) closer in a work hard, play hard (Hype phrase — say what the job involves instead) team. Send your CV with a recent photo (Asking for a photo invites appearance bias — ask for it after the offer if a visa needs it) and mention your age (Asking for age, date of birth, marital status or religion up front invites bias — collect it after the offer for visa paperwork) to [email protected]
6/100 · Likely to exclude good candidates
Missing: No who-you-are restrictions 0/40
Found 4 restrictions: "male candidates only", "young", "native english speaker", "single status". Remove them and describe the skills the job needs instead.
Missing: Fair application process 0/15
Asks for personal details up front ("CV with a recent photo", "mention your age"). Collect them after the offer, when the visa needs them.
Improve: Balanced, gender-neutral wording 6/20
Leans masculine: 3 masculine-coded vs 0 feminine-coded words. Swap a few (e.g. 'competitive' → 'motivated', 'dominant' → 'leading') or add how the team works together. Also swap gendered words: "salesman".
Missing: Plain, welcoming tone 0/10
Hype phrases: "rockstar", "work hard, play hard". They read as an in-group and put off experienced candidates.
Missing: Says who is welcome 0/15
Add a one-line welcome (e.g. 'We welcome applications from everyone, including people of determination') and any flexible-working options.
- Restrictions:
- 4
- Masculine-coded:
- 3
- Feminine-coded:
- 0