Subject: Revised offer — [Job title] (to fill in)
Dear [Candidate name] (to fill in),
Thank you for coming back to us on our offer for the [Job title] (to fill in) role at [Company name] (to fill in), and for being open about what matters to you.
We have looked carefully at your request. We can't match it in full, but we can move from [Original offer] (to fill in) to [Revised offer] (to fill in). All other terms in your offer letter stay the same.
We would genuinely like you to join the team, and we hope this works for you. Please let us know your decision by [Reply-by date] (to fill in). If it would help to talk it through, I am happy to set up a short call.
Kind regards,
[Your name] (to fill in) Talent Acquisition Manager [Company name] (to fill in)
Send from your work email. If the package changes, issue an updated offer letter too — the email alone isn't the offer.